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Monday, September 27, 2010

Comparing two international Sports

Intro:

1. Sports have been played all over the world for hundreds of years.

2. There are many different kinds of sports.

3. Some of them are very popular and sports provide many benefits to anyone who plays them.

4. Some of them are played individually, whereas, others are played in teams against teams.

5. Now, I am going to write about the similarities and differences of two sports, football and basketball.

Similarities:

1. There are some important similarities

2. Firstly, they are both team sports.

3. A basketball team consists of five players, while a football team is made up of 11 players.

4. In both of these sports, players can be replaced by substitutes.

5. Another similarity between them is that they both use a ball, although they are not the same.

6. A football is light round and hard, and made of either leather or synthetic material.

7. It is usually black and white.

8. In contrast, a basketball is generally not as light as a football and it is made of hard rubber.

9. It is usually a reddish-brown color.

Differences:

1. Although there are similarities, there are also important differences.

2. One difference is the part of the body used to control the ball.

3. In football, the feet are used to dribble, kick and trap the ball.

4. Also, people sometimes use their heads to head the ball.

5. In contrast, basketball players can only use their hands to control the ball, which they dribble pass and shoot.

6. Another obvious difference is the places that these sports are played.

7. Football is generally played outdoors on grass pitches, whereas, basketball is usually played indoors on a wooden surface.

Conclusion:

1. All in all, most sports, especially team sports like basketball and football give players a chance to develop themselves.

2. They can also learn self-discipline and teamwork at the same team.

3. That is probably the reason why basketball and football are so popular around the world.

Tuesday, September 21, 2010

Procedure - Model essay

How to change a car tyre - Model answer

(Intro) One problem with driving a car is that sometimes a tyre bursts or has a puncture. In this essay I will show you the steps involved in changing a tyre.

(Body)
First, park the vehicle in a safe place and make sure the parking brake is on. Second, loosen the nuts (bolts) on the wheel that you need to replace. Then, take the jack out of the trunk and place it under the car. You must make sure it is in the correct position and safe to use. Next, raise the jack until the wheel is off the ground. Remove the wheel and replace it with a new one. After that tighten the nuts by hand and lower the jack until the wheel is back on the ground. Finally, tighten the nuts so they are secure.

(Conclusion)
Changing a tyre is easy. However, you must make sure you follow these steps in the right order to be safe.

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Tuesday, September 14, 2010

My Story - Narrative

My Story - Introduction

My story is simple, yet it is also complicated when compared to many other people’s lives. Originally from the U.S. (I was born in Milwaukee Wisconsin – home of Harley Davidson Motorcycles), I have lived and worked in a number of different countries since I was 18 years old, and have travelled to many more in my life. Because I had studied the German language for six years in high school, and because my father worked for Siemens Corporation in the US, I had the chance to travel and work in Germany starting two months after my graduation from high school for 14 months until I returned and started the university. That was the beginning of my travels, which continued after I earned my Bachelor’s and Master’s degrees. I have a happy family of my parents and two sisters who I visit every year, but I live on my own these days.

My interests include travelling, swimming, cycling, cooking, and foreign languages, as well as reading and learning about other cultures.

I have spent the last 2 ½ years in the UAE which I consider my home now. I have been impressed on how modern, forward-thinking and progressive the country is.

I look forward to learning more about all my students in order to make this term a successful and enjoyable one.

Gregory (The Fox)

Sunday, September 12, 2010

My Introduction

This is my personal introduction. Welcome to English 125, I am happy to help you learn and improve your English skills in this course. We will have many chances for you to develop your skills.
I have lived in the UAE for 2 1/2 years now, but it seems like yesterday that I was arriving from a very cold and snowy place. As you can see from my blog photo I enjoy cycling and even rode my bicycle 1000km from Lhasa, Tibet to Kathmandu in Nepal over the Himalaya mountains. The mountain in the background of my blog photo is Mt. Everest, and the photo was taken at Everest Base Camp on the Tibet side of the mountain. There is a road which allows cars and trucks to drive to the base camp village. but not to the actual base camp which is used for teams preparing to climb Everest, or as the locals call it, Chomolungma - the Mother Goddess.
I traveled with 8 other riders and a support group of two trucks, two cooks and two drivers who set up camp and cooked for us everyday. The only thing I had to do was show up to eat breakfast and be ready to ride every morning. I missed the first two parts of the start of trek from Lhasa because the Chinese authorities gave me some trouble in obtaining my visa for the trip. But, I caught up to the group on the third day after traveling to Lhasa by myself and staying there for two days to acclimate to the altitude (3500m!).
Speaking about altitude, we mostly cycled between 4000 - 5200m, except the second last day when we started at over 4000m and after a high pass we rode downhill for almost 90km out of 120km!
It was a great adventure which I can recommend to anyone who's looking for an exciting holiday that's fun but tough! I would do it again, but not until after a few months.

The Fox

Sunday, September 5, 2010

Welcome to Eng125!

Gentlemen: Welcome to Eng125

This blogsite will be be your chance to post and compare your written work with your classmates. It will also be part of the total grading for the course.

The most important things are to learn and have fun while increasing your language skills!

The Fox